A short story on baking bread and elevating a daughter's mood. A creative writing post that shows a scene in action, as part of the ongoing teachings on scene and also invites readers to an international teaching.
1) What Scene Recipe Ingredients were used here? Which ones were left out?
2) Paid subscribers: Can you show me how your scenes are progressing? Post in the chat and let’s see how you’re doing. I’ll comment aggressively on the first three that go up, the ones that follow…I will certainly comment on but more lightly.
I love how the bread, Paris and your daughter are all woven together in this writing.
I also appreciated the bread recipe. I have wanted to try a gluten free recipe but it seemed difficult the one you have appears much easier and is very clear. Thank you!
Greetings from AWP 24 in Kansas City! More to come but I wanted to say how much I loved that story and the way you are telling us what you will focus on in Paris. I’m as excited as Jo that you are coming to Paris!
Oh and that weaving!! It’s a beauty, she is brilliant.
Your turn:
1) What Scene Recipe Ingredients were used here? Which ones were left out?
2) Paid subscribers: Can you show me how your scenes are progressing? Post in the chat and let’s see how you’re doing. I’ll comment aggressively on the first three that go up, the ones that follow…I will certainly comment on but more lightly.
Okay I believe I am seeing all of the factors on the Scene Recipe Card. Let me know if that is correct or not.
Paris sounds fabulous, however I would need a scholarship and I do not think they are giving those out!
I love how the bread, Paris and your daughter are all woven together in this writing.
I also appreciated the bread recipe. I have wanted to try a gluten free recipe but it seemed difficult the one you have appears much easier and is very clear. Thank you!
Greetings from AWP 24 in Kansas City! More to come but I wanted to say how much I loved that story and the way you are telling us what you will focus on in Paris. I’m as excited as Jo that you are coming to Paris!
Oh and that weaving!! It’s a beauty, she is brilliant.
see?? i love her art. crazy talent.
First, I REALLY loved the Scene Recipe Card - thank you! Next, I loved the bread woven into daughter and Paris. Sounds like an AMAZING conference!!!