Chapter Seven: A couple in trouble applies strategic communication techniques to an ailing marriage. The efforts seem to be working until a quiet day in May when something startling is revealed by Rick about one of the kids…
I've not heard of a flashback in a flashback. Always something new to learn. I like the way the story is moving along with all their lives. A lot to juggle and flesh out.
Three writerly questions:
1) This is the longest chapter yet, writing-wise, why do I take this liberty at this point?
2) What is a major error of construction here? (Hint: this is to do with exposition) Bonus: If you find it, how to fix the issue?
I am finally caught up reading. Wow. so good Jennifer, and to think you lived this.
I am finally caught up reading. Wow. so good Jennifer.
Just now caught up on the chapters. So. Very. Good. Wow.
I've not heard of a flashback in a flashback. Always something new to learn. I like the way the story is moving along with all their lives. A lot to juggle and flesh out.
Loved how you brought in the homeless guy as an echo to your past.